拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
College is a special stage of our life,in which we should learn to master more and more professional knowledge.Meanwhile we have to adapt to the interim from school to society.So a number of colleges encourage students to take paty in the social activities so that they can accomplish the first tasks in the path of life. School life is quite different from social activities.Therefore,to the start with,students can touch the true meaning of life in practice that we can not learn from books.For instance:honesty,patient,duty and the ability to overcome difficulties.What is more,social activities allow us to comprehend the realties of the society and enrich our life experience. In my opinion,as we see,social activities not only can improve our knowledge but also can sttl ourselves.It is an intangible husk.