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University is a special stage of our life,in which we are supposed to learn to master more and more professional knowledge.Meanwhile we have to adapt to the interim between school and society.So a number of universities encourage undergraduates to participate in the social activities so that they can accomplish the first tasks in the path of life. School life is quite extremely distinctive from social activities.Therefore,to start with,undergraduates can touch the true meaning of their own life in practice that we can not learn from books.For instance:honesty,patient,duty and the ability to overcome difficulties.What is more,social activities allow us to comprehend the realties of the society and enrich our life experience. In my opinion,as we see,social activities not only can improve our knowledge but also can steel ourselves.As a result,Both experience and capability are the keys to success in society.In a word, it is an intangible husk