作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
University is a special stage of our life,in which we are supposed to learn to master more and more professional knowledge.Meanwhile we have to adapt to the interim between school and society.So a number of universities encourage undergraduates to participate in the social activities so that they can accomplish the first tasks in the path of life. All we know that practice is the sole criterion for testing truth.Therefore,to start with,undergraduates can touch the true meaning of their own life in practice that we can not learn from books.For instance:honesty,patient,duty and the ability to overcome difficulties.What is more,social activities allow us to comprehend the realties of the society and enrich our life experience.Finally social activities make us try our best to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. In my opinion,social activities not only can improve our knowledge but also can steel ourselves.As a result,both experience and capability are the key to success in society.