作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
University is a special stage of our life,in which we are supposed to learn to master more and more professional knowledge.Meanwhile we have to adapt to the interim between school and society.So a number of universities encourage undergraduates to participate in the social activities so that they can accomplish the first tasks in the path of life. All we know that practice is the sole criterion for testing truth and Experience is the mother of wisdom.Therefore,to start with,recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution.Secondly undergraduates can touch the true meaning of their own life in practice that we can not learn from books.For instance:honesty,patient,duty and the ability to overcome difficulties.What is more,social activities allow us to comprehend the realties of the society and enrich our life experience.Finally social activities make us try our best to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. In my opinion,social activities not only can improve our knowledge but also can steel ourselves.In a word,It is an intangible husk and only in this way can we achieve our goal.