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University is a special stage of our life,in which we are supposed to master more and more professional knowledge.Meanwhile we have to adapt to the interim between school and society.So a number of universities encourage undergraduates to participate in the social activities so that they can accomplish the first tasks in the path of life. All we know that practice is the sole criterion for testing truth.Therefore,to start with,undergraduates can touch the true meaning of their own life in practice that we can not learn from books.For instance:honesty,patient,duty and the ability to overcome difficulties.What is more,social practice is a bridge between their theory and reality which allows us to comprehend the realties of the society and enrich our life experience.Finally social activities make us try our best to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. In my opinion,social activities not only can improve our knowledge but also can steel ourselves.To sum up, it is an intangible husk and only in this way can we achieve our goal.