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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；可适当增加从句的使用；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；连词使用偏少。
Recently I have visited your company in NewYork, I'm interested in your product 5670. It is very small and beatuiful.Could you please send your price list to us for reference?We would like to establish business relationship with you. We will discuss with you about this case, and then we can start production if possible. Anyway,I am glad to know you. I wish you have a good day. Looking forward to your feedback! Thanks very much!
