文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。
University is a special stage of our life,in which we are supposed to adapt to the interim between school and society.So a number of universities encourage undergraduates to participate in the social activities so that they can accomplish the first tasks in the path of life. As a proverb goes the sole criterion for testing truth and experience is the mother of wisdom.Therefore,it has the following advantages undergraduates can touch the true meaning of their own life in practice that we can not learn from books.For instance:honesty,patient,duty and the ability to overcome difficulties.What is more,social practice is a bridge between their theory and reality which allows us to comprehend the realties of the society and enrich our life experience.Finally social activities make us try our best to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. In my opinion,social activities not only can improve our knowledge but also can steel ourselves.To sum up, it is an intangible husk and only in this way can we achieve our goal.