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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
University is a special stage of our life,in which we are supposed to adapt to the interim between school and society.So a number of universities encourage undergraduates to participate in the social activities so that they can accomplish the first tasks in the path of life. As a proverb goes the sole criterion for testing truth and experience is the mother of wisdom.Therefore,it has the following advantages undergraduates can touch the true meaning of their own life in practice that we can not learn from books.For instance:honesty,patient,duty and the ability to overcome difficulties.What is more,social practice is a bridge between their theory and reality which allows us to comprehend the realties of the society and enrich our life experience.Finally social activities make us try our best to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. In my opinion,social activities not only can improve our knowledge but also can steel ourselves.To sum up, By taking part in all these activities, students can widen their horizon. They get to understand the life out of school which is unfamiliar to them. They can also gain knowledge that is never taught in class or obtained from books.
