2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇表达灵活；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

My views on online shopping As we konw,nowadays shopping onlin trends to be an fashion and becomes more and more pervasive,as to play an significant role in people's everyday life.And I have some views on online shopping. Every coin has two sides.Although shopping online is striking convenient ,but shopping online also has many looming problems.Firstly,Shopping online makes people stay at home instead of going to market,and people have less chances to interact with each other.If so,the capacity of people to communicate is affected greatly.Secondly,shopping online creates numerous troubles for these real shops.many real shops are closed down and the statistics of real economy have been dim and negative recently.Finally,many counterfeit products are sold online,and many of them have quality problems. To solve these problems,I would like to share my suggestions.I hold the views that the govenment should take some instant actions to reduce the counterfeit products selling online,such as commerce legislation and quality inspection.What's more,people should go to market to shop partly,not only stay at home just to shop online by computer.