2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；全文结构较为严谨；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，高级词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。

Nowadays, computers play a very important role in our daily life. It is true that computers have bring much convenience to our human beings. Coputers have enriched our life, but many people, especially young people are addicted to computers, they spend too much time on computers to play computer games, surfing on the Internet and so on. This is bad for their health. Computers are made of some chemical materials which is harm for our body. And too much time online makes people indulged in the digital world so that they will care less about the reality and lose the enterprise of their life. Meanwhile, they cannot acheive their value in the society. The computers become the master of these computer addicters. It is vital neccessary for us to cope with the relationship between our human beings and computers. Computers are just tools for us, we can handle them, use them to satisfy our requirement, but not controlled by them.