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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰。

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Nowadays, computers play a very important role in our daily life. It is true that computers have brought much convenience to our human beings. Coputers have enriched our life, but many people, especially young people are addicted to computers. They spend too much time on computers to play computer games, surfing on the Internet and so on. This is bad for their health. Computers are made of some chemical materials which are radioactive. And staring at the computers' screen causes the short-sighted. In recent years, the number of short-sighted is increasing. And too much time online makes people indulged in the digital world so that they will care less about the reality and lose the enterprise of their life. The computers become the master of these computer addicts. It is vital necessary for us to cope with the relationship between our human beings and computers. Computers are just tools for us, we can handle them, use them to satisfy our requirement, but not controlled by them.

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