语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句法知识扎实,可适当增加长句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。
Generally speaking people believe the things that they see on themselves.But sometimes it's unwise to draw an immediate conclusion once you see something.We ought to do some researches before we estimate the things so that we won't blame somebody who is innocent and make yourself be a fool. I want to take Zhugeliang who almost helped Liubei built a country for example though it may not be very suitable.Most of us know them through the book written by Luoguanzhong which is almost an adventure of Zhugeliang.And affected by it,most of us believe that Zhugeliang is a man who knows everything and can do something that is incredible such as borrowing the east wind.But if we have read the history of that epoch we will know Zhugeliang is not as powerful as we thought. So it's unwise to draw a conclusion immediately as we see something.Especially the Internet is so developed nowadays that we can receive numberless messages everyday and we can hardly judge these messages are true or not.
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