正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;请作者增加词汇丰富度;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
My father is very busy. Every day he goes to work by subway to the school. He teachs math at school.He is good at math.So he is a good math teacher. In the afternoon, he eats lunch at school. After lunch, he also reads newspapers. Then he goes home at 5:30. He eats dinner. Then, he takes a bath in the evening. He watches TV at living room. After watching TV, he goes to bed at 10:00. My father works hard. I like my father very much!