小学三年级英语作文:My father's day

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

My father is very busy. Every day he goes to work by subway to the school. He teaches math at school.He is good at math.So he is a good math teacher. In the afternoon, he eats lunch at school. After lunch, he also reads newspapers. Then he goes home at 5:30. He eats dinner. Then, he takes a bath in the evening. He watches TV at living room. After watching TV, he goes to bed at 10:00. My father works hard. I like my father very much!