2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City in China As for the most interesting place in my hometown,the Great Wall comes first in my mind.There are too many reasons for a person who comes to China visit the Great Wall.And,I'm sure the scenery there won't disappoint you. Firstly,this great construction has been buit since the Qin dynasty,and the following emperors of different periods improved it constantly.As a result,it becomes one of the Seven Wonders of the World.The main parts of the Great Wall located on montains,then you can enjoy a perfect sight of the surroundings,such as the big forest,and extensive lands.The scenery will just make you feel shocking,and be conquered by the ancient Chinese people for their great achievement undoubtedly. Have you been expected to see it?I'm looking forward to being your guide in Beijing.