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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5949
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

People call the city or the small town home for a wealth of reasons, each having its own advantages and disadvantages. Primarily, the sma丨丨-town people espouse familiarity. In contrast, the city dwellers hide amidst the anonymity. These statements require further scrutiny. The city and the small town have many benefits to consider. What is right to start out life could change as one gets older. People are lucky at times that they do not have to choose, at least not forever, but can move at will. Maybe this is why some richer people have homes both in the small town and in the city.

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