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文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒。
my hometon if a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown.i will invited my friend visit my campus.not only is it my mother-school,but also it is the specific memeory in my hometown. my primmary school have a library,four teaching buildings,swimming pool,plant park,museum.first,i will take him to library,there are many books.the first floor is chinese cultual.the second floor is mathe books.different floor have differentsubject.then, we get along the teaching building arrival to museum.we can see a swimming pool besides the museum andthe plant park between teaching building and museum.the museum is very important to our campus,because only one in our town.i will introduce the chinese cultual,deit and school history.it can make him know more china clearly. in summary,as a student,i should succeed our cultual and transmit our cultual.it is a duty in every student.we must clearly to remember it in mind .
