2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；请注意分段。

As far as we know,computer that the day was invented to the present is only several decades,surprisingly, and it has been made use of in a wide rang of the workplace,in addition to its fast calculation and convenience operation,computer has widely spread into and extremely influence people’s daily life.Then, an increasing number of people has took much account on the excessive use of computer. Internet ,as a popular tool of computer to communicate with each other,unfortunately,let people would rather stay around at home than go outside to social with ,in a long time,it would set back the development of people’s communication ability in face to face.what’s more,as fast calculation and convenience operation as computer is, public felt very strongly that may be someday computer is able to thinking just like as human being,and conversely control human.