高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章衔接手法恰当；简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

My Hometown My hometown is beautiful both before and now. It was green in the past years. There are a number of trees around the town in summer.We often sit under the trees to keep cool. It was so fine.And there was some fish swimming in the clean river.Although the houses were simple and the streets were small, I love it . Because it was full of the small of nature.People lived there poorly but happily. Now there are many tall buildings and stores instead of the trees. Many kinds of cars running on the streets.I like it because it is scientifcal.But the encorven grows worse,there is no fish playing in the river.It is the most important thing to deal with the problems.There is no pleasure sitting the tree. Also there is no tree. I prefer the past town.