2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；高级词汇使用不足同时拼写错误偏多；文中错误句子较多。

hello,i very happminess bring to my favirote city of china. i think chong qing that is around words of beautiful city. chongqing have more mountuns and rule.or chongqing xapepleo is very esussted. chongqing have more view. example for,ciqikou ,yangrenjie,jiefngbei. one of jie fangbei is very rich . this have lots of stros and reaterant.if you like read book. you can go to wen yi libiary .that have around words books. you must study more konlegabie . so there is good places.