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My best friend Johnny who i met him in the school. He is humble and self- motivated.Besides that, he often helps with my homework .I am not good at studying, sometimes i could not understand the things that Johnny had teach me. But , he is friendly and patient,he is willing to help when i am in need .What' s more,i am always being motivated by Johnny,he teach me a lot of things such as politics and economy.No denying that Johnny is an egghead and he is intelligent.After we graduated from university,we are still best friends and stay together constantly.He became one of my important people in my life,and our relationship will be long-standing.