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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36978
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

用户练习作文:

My best friend Johnny who i met him in the school. He is humble and self- motivated.Besides that, he often helps with my homework .I am not good at studying, sometimes i could not understand the things that Johnny had teach me. But , he is friendly and patient,he is willing to help when i am in need .What' s more,i am always being motivated by Johnny,he teach me a lot of things such as politics and economy.No denying that Johnny is an egghead and he is intelligent.After we graduated from university,we are still best friends and stay together constantly.He became one of my important people in my life,and our relationship will be long-standing.

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