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It's not ture to come to a conclusion when you saw or listened anything immediately.It's old saying that what you see is true.But in some situation,it is not relable.When you draw a conclusion,you should look into it to get clear whether is true.I remember that when I was in middle school ,I ususlly argued with her many times for some meaningful things.And one of it is that when I saw her passed by a little poor boy and she didn't give the boy help.I thought she was not kind and cruel.But finally I knew she just went to a restruant and bought some dish for him .We knew it isn't rational that drawing a conclusion immediately.And maybe we will make mistakes when we got a wrong conclusion .So everytime when we come to a conclusion,we should be calm down,and get the right answer.
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