正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
My favorite subject is English. Every time when have an English class.I am so happy. I have a dream from small to large.I want to be an English teacher in my future.SO every time When I have an English class I am very seriously listen to the teacher。When I have free time.I usually read some English Magazine.I think it can help me to improve my vocabulary. I remember one time when was in Grade 6.I test ninety points in an exam.And the teacher rewarded me two dollars.At that time I am really excited.I fell in love with English than other classes.I think English is very useful.I hope you're like it too.