小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足；简单句偏多了；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

I have a many good friends. Wang tao is a one of my friend. He is a beautiful boy. He has biue hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. He is good at singing.And he want to became Singer Hee is a smart boy. He likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. He is also nice. He often helps us . our classmates like his very much.