作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Dear sir Thank you very much for the job you offer. However, I make a hard decision to quit it. The reason I resign as follows . Firstly,I have not enough self-confidence,both in professional knowledge and experience,which makes me attain to success hardly between designing and editing. Secondly, I have few time to accompany with my family . Actually,when I decided to get into your company, I hope more time to accompany with my family. I do apologize for I have caused and please let me know if there is anything I can do for your company about transition. Yours sincerely Li Ming