正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
From: Wang Haiyang Writter E-mail address: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date: 13 Nov. 23rd 2008 To: Mr. Johnson Receiver E-mail address: sales-department@hotmail.com Dear Sir or Mediam, We have received 3,000 pcs product on 22nd Dec. send from your company, but according to our signing of the No. 35 order, the product quantity should be 3,500 pcs, the left 500 pcs we not receive until now. so please check your product list, we are looking forward to your early reply! Best regards! Haipang Wang