2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句。

my view on online shopping today,online shopping become a fashion.because people life become better than before and more and more family have more money to buy goods which can improve their living standard. however,online shopping like a coin has two sides.when it bring convenient to our life,it also mean it has big risk.there have 3 points:first,online shopping have big problem that the self-information easy to know by internet.second,the goods don't have any guaranteed quality.we see the goods only by picture,but no detail.third,the thief utilize it to cheat the consummer.we have not way to conplain when we meet indeed. in summary,shopping online will popular in future.although need more cautious and go to the official website.only in this way we could enjoy it and earn more.