2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

Just one time,I accompany with you to see the the death of sky and land,smiling in the sunshine,chatting in the free air.Do you know ,what I want? The world is small,I take you to the corner of the earth.We quit the quest at a palace,where is no anxiety.We get older and older slowly at a time ,when is no trouble.Do you know,all my heartbeat are beat for you.