作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇词汇使用准确,但要避免拼写出错;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Dear Mr.Wang Thank you very much for having offered me this promising job to work for the best selling magazine. It never occured to me that I would have to leave. However, today I make the hard decesion to quit it. Painfully,I have realized that I overestimate my inadequate,my personally actually can not match the requirement of the position which have value open-mindedness and creativity.What is more,the shortage of professional knowledge,both in designing and editing,has influenced my job performance more negatively than I ever expected. I do apologize for any inconvenience I have might caused and wish you could consider my request.Please let me know if there is anything I can do for make the transition easer for conpany. Yous sincerely Li Ming