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Dear Mr.Wang Thank you very much for having offered me this promising job to work for the best selling magazine. It never occurred to me that I would have to leave. However, today I make the hard decesion to quit it. Painfully,I have realized that I overestimate my inadequate,my personally actually can not match the requirement of the position which have value open-mindedness and creativity.What is more,the shortage of professional knowledge,both in designing and editing,has influenced my job performance more negatively than I ever expected. I do apologize for any inconvenience I have might caused and wish you could consider my request.Please let me know if there is anything I can do to make the transition easer for company. Yous sincerely Li Ming