作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear Mr.Wang Thank you very much for this job you offer,but I am afraid that I have to write this letter to quit this job. It is valuable opportunity to work for here,but this job does not suit me. At first, I have inadequate self-confidence with this job because I possess neither professional knowledge nor relevant working experience.Secondly,I have less time for my family beacuse I have few weekends here.actually when I applied for this job, I had hoped to have more time with my kid and parents. I wish you could understand my decesion and I do apologize for the trouble I might cause.