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2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:39浏览次数:8753
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题目 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
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1.坚强的意志是成功的重要保证
2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命
3.学生也是这样,不刻苦学习,终究不会成为有用之才
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用。

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Nothing Succeeds without a strong will The strong will is an important part of success as evidenced again and again.If you have this mind,you would have reach to the succeeds. There is no doubt that those of people who have firm faith will finish the greater mission.Do one thing,it just depends on fantasy no marginal and talk irresponsibly that never makes a difference.Because the obstacle is filled with everywhere the whole of your life,and both of things don't work in specific time obviously.You have to some spiritual things which encourage you to forward,that is what plays a key role in your life whether you have these of awareness or not.On the other hand,we should that draws to the belieft from the life and to make it get your qualities.And then it would effect your understanding for life with having experienced the previous life's experience accumulative.The ultimate it makes you reach the terminal by using those of special characters. When you are a student,the situation is similar with you to be what you have experienced in study.If you didn't work hard,you would have conventional one.So the strong will is the necessary gateway to success.

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