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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Nothing Succeeds without a strong will The strong will is an important part of success as evidenced again and again.If you have this mind,you would have reach to the succeeds. There is no doubt that those of people who have firm faith will finish the greater mission.Do one thing,it just depends on fantasy no marginal and talk irresponsibly that never makes a difference.Because the obstacle is filled with everywhere the whole of your life,and both of things don't work in specific time obviously.You have to some spiritual things which encourage you to forward,that is what plays a key role in your life whether you have these of awareness or not.On the other hand,we should that draws the belief from life and to make it get your qualities.And then it will affect your understanding of your life with having experienced thing that is the life's experience accumulative.Afterward it makes you reach your terminal by using the extraordinary conviction. When you are a student,the situation is similar with your learning experience.If you didn't work hard,you would have been gotted a conventional one.So the strong will is the necessary gateway to success.
