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Anna will come to China next week, she is best friend during I was studying in American university.she will stay China one month. she hope to travel the famous place in China during this month ,I will take her to see Beijing famours travel places,including great wall , palace museum,summer palace. the last week, I will take her to climb mountain huang in Anhui province which is the famous mountain.and I will take her to shoping the last day. I hope she will enjoy her trip.
