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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13034
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
评语:

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中从句数量稍显不足,注意个别有错误的句子;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

用户练习作文:

With the technological development, more and more people don't comunicate each other,they spend much time in internet.They negelected the important signifcance of communication. The comunication has many significances.For example,Firstly,it can promote understanding and clear the air,especially in family and in company.Then,it can take more wonderful ideas and good things for us.,When you communicate with your families or your friends,you can get mang advices and ideas which can help you solve many trouble which can't be solved by yourself.So we should value the significance of communication,and we need to spend much time in it. In my view,I believe that communication is very important for us,our lifes need it to make more wonderful experiences.And if we don't communicate each other,the society will be cold and ruin.

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