2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；文中高级词汇表达比较恰当，但单词拼写不够认真；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

Now as technology develops,the relationship between human and computer is becoming closer and closer.Using computer is convenient for us in our daily life.When we relax,we can play games or talk with our friends.And when we work,the functions of computer are so efficient that we work easily.Nowdays we can gain informations from computer.It's a great process that using computer.But there are some disadvantages that still exist.We may more rely on computer,we may become lazy and aren't concentrate on the relastic relationships between friends and us.More children are addicted to computer games and maybe some kids can easily get some bad information from computer.So we should use computer approprately and focus the real world.