2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；作者词汇基础不错，同时请加强单词拼写的检查。

Time fiys beforewe have knowed it.However,there is something like it rapidly in the process of packaging.It's the products,common but original. What makes them gradually put on different kinds of colorful dresses?The reasons are not hard to find.But I believe of all these reasons,the salesmarket competition is the most important.For lack of necessary customers,many makers began drawing their attention to the appearance while reduce the quality day by day.In addition,consuemrs seem to hold the same adjustment conscious so that they pick up there needs accordingtothe package. as far as i'm concerned,excessive packaging is wasting our limited resource rather than loom their power.thus It is avaliable to appeal to the government that they take on themselves to relative rules in case of those phenomena.