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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第23篇:想一辈子就在一家公司工作是不现实的

发布时间:2013-08-13 16:53浏览次数:966
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

It is unrealistic for people to expect to work for the same company or employer for all of their lives.

想一辈子就在一家公司工作是不现实的。

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文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

I held agree with this view that it is unrealistic for people to expect to work for the same company or employer for all of their lives.There ara some reasones as following. Firstly, We need try different works in our whole life .only after seval changing work we will konw wich work is suit for us and we will do it well.it's little possible that we will have a good work that we like and it can support our my life ,or most impotant is the first work will realise our true value. Secondly,the work is a great part of our life.In a sense,we go to work not only for earning money to suport our daily life but also it's our life.we are social.we hope by working to prove we are a complete person.So it's not easy to determine a whole life work.

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