2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear foreign friend My hometown is qiqihar. This is a beautiful place . It has many place ,For example,Longsha park,Zhalong natual town and Mingyue island and so on.qiqihar is Heilongjiang province's the second city,It is the taiffic center in the west of Heilongjiang province.My hometown qiqihar is very doog and beautiful .I like my hometown qiqihar.