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I will take her go to my hometown.China culture is very deeply.But if you wanted to feel it and resolve ,which you need to living for a long time.The reason why i choose my hometown is that i known it very deeply.So i want take her to here. My hometown be local at Henan Province,have a name is "zhongyuan".There are have a lot of empriors builded capitial address and culture kownledges.Coming here you can learn enrich of china.