高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
As the saying goes, "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention." Nonetheless living in an age when information explodes which confuses us. So in my opinion, it's most important to recognize the value of information but mot to accept all without thinking. The difficult recognizing information is because the fake information may explode more quickly and people may add some worst information to it so that you would easily make us waste time or even be cheated by it. To avoid these problems, as far as I am concerned, we should firstly choose the information source that can be believed. Through it, irrelevant information has been rejected, after that we still couldn't trust all because we must use dependent and logical thinking and expression which helps us choose what we need and avoids being distracted by irrelevant information. As a student, we will meet thousands of information which means we should recognize it and protect ourselves from information explosion.