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拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
The significative life Try our best to live a good and significative life is human nature,as for which life is meaningful,different persons have different opinions. For ordinary people,their aim maybe:Every day exercises for an hour, the health works for 50 years, happy life for a lifetime.Like this, they would feel satisfied,and the life is what their aspire after.For a teacher,the significative in their hearts maybe foster a lot of talented people.For businessman's goal is produce many goods.In a word,the meaningful life has a lot of forms. As far as I'm concerned.Our life is not only to pursue something that we interested in but also contribute to the society.Becouse if we just pursue ourselves,we would feel fruitless .Contray to this,we will fell a sense of achievement.
