字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者词汇基础不错,能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇,但词汇拼写要再接再厉。
As is vividly portrayed in the cartoon, there're two men and a fallen bottle.To the scene,two men responded totally differently.One man ,feeling extremely sad,with his hand covering his face,signed"All has gone!"While the other appeared much more optimistic.He ran happily to raise up the bottle and said with great graititude"There is still a little left!" The purpose of the cartoon convenys that ,confronting with unfortunate circumstances in life ,the attitude differs greatly in two group of individuals.The optimistist observes the remaining benifits and then had a bright opinion,however,the pessimistist just notices the losses thereby thinking negatively. Misfortunes mean obvious losses,however they still bring latent opportunities and strong push to people with optimistic mind.As the famous proverb goes"Optimism is the faith that leads to achievement."From the perspective of optimists,firing,a cancer disaster,will be a reminder of the necessity for an urgent improvement in their personality or expertise .Sensing the signal for change,those optimists will strive to achieve personal growth,which provides a guarantee for a splendid-shining future.Therefore,in face of misforutnes people should adopt an optimistic attitude.