2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

Dear all in order to improve and rich our students team activities.we are planing to climb Mountain for all student on April10, and place is Daqing Mountain. pls ensure you can arrive at foot of mountain at 8:00 a.m on time , we will special prepare some of things for each person :including for 2pcs bottle water and a towel . we also take some of medical if you felt any uncomfortable ,pls tell us,that we can help, another ,pls ensure you can wear a suit for climb shoes, it is very important for protect yourself, you will easy to fall if your shoes was skidded. the last , I hope you will enjoy this activity.