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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9778
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
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Time flies before we have recognized it.However,there is something like it rapidly in the process of packaging.It is the products,common but original. What makes them gradually put on various pretty dresses?The reasons are not difficult to discover.But I believe of all these reasons,the sales market competition is the most essential.For lack of necessary customers,many makers began drawing their attention to the appearance while reduce the quality day by day.In addition,consumers seem to hold the same adjustment conscious so that they pick up there needs in accordance with the package. As far as I'm concerned,excessive packaging is misusing our limited resource rather than shower off their power.Thus It is available to appeal to the government that they take on themselves to rules relative to in case of those phenomena.

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