有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错。
Time flies before we have recognized it.However,there is something like it rapidly in the process of packaging.It is the products,common but original. What makes them gradually put on various pretty dresses?The reasons are not difficult to discover.But I believe of all these reasons,the sales market competition is the most essential.For lack of necessary customers,many makers began drawing their attention to the appearance while reduce the quality day by day.In addition,consumers seem to hold the same adjustment conscious so that they pick up there needs in accordance with the package. As far as I'm concerned,excessive packaging is misusing our limited resource rather than shower off their power.Thus It is available to appeal to the government that they take on themselves to rules relative to in case of those phenomena.