2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；熟练使用了一些长难句；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

Dear all in order to improve and rich our students team activities.we are planing to climb Mountain for all student on April10, and place is Daqing Mountain. pls ensure you can arrive at foot of mountain at 8:00 a.m on time , we will special prepare some of things for each people :including for 2pcs bottle water and 1pc towel . we also take some of medical if you felt any uncomfortable ,pls tell us,that we can help, another ,pls ensure you can wear a suit for climb shoes, it is very important for protect yourself, mayber you will be fallen if your shoes was skidded. the last , I hope you will enjoy this activity.