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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
评语:

文章上下文衔接自然;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

As Internet developes,we all can use computer or ceilphone to surf on Internet.The basic function of Internet is that we can contact with our friend more convenient.When some people go abroad or somewhere fare away from us,we can use internet to communciate.It seems that we are become closer.But there are some people rely on internet,they can talked about everything on internet,they don't want to go out with friends and refused to talked with people face to face.As time goes by ,they realize they are embrassed when people talked in realistic.I think we can keep contact with friends who are far away from us.But we should focus on the real world.

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