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As Internet developes,we all can use computer or ceilphone to surf on Internet.The basic function of Internet is that we can contact with our friend more convenient.When some people go abroad or somewhere fare away from us,we can use internet to communciate.It seems that we are become closer.But there are some people rely on internet,they can talked about everything on internet,they don't want to go out with friends and refused to talked with people face to face.As time goes by ,they realize they are embrassed when people talked in realistic.I think we can keep contact with friends who are far away from us.But we should focus on the real world.
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