托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第41篇:为什么学生会选择出国留学

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In contemporary society, many students choose go abroad for studying instead of staying at their native country. As for these there are some reason beneath. First of all , in many counties , the parents ruled almost everything for their children even the wearing and food, and under the pressures our children's thoughts are detentioned and many of them think it is essential to go abroad for breaking the situation.Take me for example, my parents prepared everything for me , thus i need not to do anything but i think there is no freedom for me to say and also decrease the ability of indepentdent. So i think staying home is not a good choice for my better future, and as we know many other countries advocating individualism , this make me eager for being outside. In addition, many countries have plentiful good views . As an old saying told as :" world just like a book if you stay at home you just look at only one page." I totally agree with the saying, to enriched our horizon we should to change our environment of studying. And it has merits, such as at the same time of studying we can also learn some native customers. In summary, i think there are two main reason for our children to go to attend schools or universities outside their home countries.One is for freedom and another one is to learn some native customers.