字数:200满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
As we can see from this picture,two footballers were playing a game that one of them was preparing to kick the ball a goal.Suddenly,the kicker is imaging what the door is so small that he couldn't give the goal,while the goalkeeper is thinking what the door is so big that he couldn't keep the goal. This picture,at first,conveys a situation that it is playing a heat football match.It also demonstrates a universal phenomenon that how does most people's mind when they are facing troubles.Most of them also have exaggerated the trouble whatever faced. When it comes to talk about troubles,none of us would like them.But we shouldn't see them by using magnifying glass.We must face them with a right attitude.The biggest enemy is ourselves.If all of us do this,we will more easily success.