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2007年考研英语作文真题:面对困难时候的想法

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:59浏览次数:2182
要求:
题目:面对困难时候的想法(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.support your view with an example/ examples

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。

用户练习作文:

As we can see from this picture,two footballers were playing a game that one of them was preparing to kick the ball a goal.Suddenly,the kicker is imaging what the door is so small that he couldn't give the goal,while the goalkeeper is thinking what the door is so big that he couldn't keep the goal. This picture,at first,conveys a situation that it is playing a heat football match.It also demonstrates a universal phenomenon that how does most people's mind when they are facing troubles.Most of them also have exaggerated the trouble whatever faced. When it comes to talk about troubles,none of us would like them.But we shouldn't see them by using magnifying glass.We must face them with a right attitude.The biggest enemy is ourselves.If all of us do this,we will more easily success.

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