使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
The protection of wild animals means that people try their best to protect the distinguished animals and habit.Its aim is to be sure that the future person can enjoy the fantanstic nature and realize the importance of wild animal. Many countries had set up special wild animal protection organ in order to boost relevant physical .Besides,there are also some independent nonprofit focusing on the career.Wild animal protection have things with many aspects,such as econicl,this refect on the land that goverment give,as well as the volunteer is hard to find the most useful soil plant.
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